Monday, September 21, 2009

HW 4 - Triangular Comments 1

Kareem,
I like how you sticked to the topic that digitalization is making us lazy. You said things that everybody could relate to and it really is a scary thought what the world is coming to.

It is so easy to not leave your house but get all the amenities that you need, even ones that you don't need, like Netflix and online gaming.

What your saying is something I have been thinking about for a long time. As generations go by, people are getting dumber and dumber. Lazier and lazier. It's like Katherine said that peoples thumbs are getting bigger so they can text better.

What you could have done better is make the arguments more succinct and organized. You were kind of all over the place with your ideas, even though they were good, you could have taken time to expand them.

I look forward to reading more of your posts, because I feel the same way.

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